Engagement Guest Book - Critiques Welcome

[Erin Kathleen]

So this is only my second guest book I've designed. What do you think??
























Comments and critiques always welcome!

EK

[smseeley]

Love the simple design. Also love shooting at Flippen Park! Only spread I am not crazy about is the one with the lowered opacity. It hurts my eyes :-)

[Erin Kathleen]

Yes, I wasn't sure about the low opacity pages. B&G specifically wanted that image on the left but they're so small on it, I didn't know what else to do with it... Any other ideas?

[smseeley]

I would just raise it back to 100% opacity and maybe take out the image on the right, although I think it would be fine if you left it in, just wouldn't give you as much room to write.

[Michael Lyons]

i dont see anything

[onewingedangel73106]

ditto blue boxes

[scottlyn]

[Erin Kathleen]

Sorry! Client requested a change from blue to green for the accent color so I had to delete all the images and upload the new ones. I just forgot to fix the thread... I'll fix it tomorrow b/c my laptop's about to die and I need to crash.

[Erin Kathleen]

Fixed

[bigjon0107]

It doesent look like you went swimming in the fountian this time!! Well i guess there is always bridals....

[Erin Kathleen]

I totally would have, but at 7 months pregnant in December, not so much. I should have, though. Would have been more fun. I haven't lost a camera in there yet, either, and I know you're waiting for me to.

[bigjon0107]

Only if i am not there and hear about it later...after all, my job has always been to "save the camera, don't worry about me"

[Erin Kathleen]

Yes, if you let the gear go in the water you're in trouble. Then again, lately the rule was not to let the PG photog trip/fall in general since I tend to be so distracted when I'm shooting anyway.

[photopam]

I kinda like the lower opacity (maybe not quite that low) I think it will be ok in the printed version. Things on the computer don't always look the same in print. I like this idea too. I may have to put a sample one together to try and sell...