First using Tricoast Action set

[lorellana]

I just got the action set from Mikey, what do you think? hopefully I upload the files right







Luis

[Clint_Smith]

get your flash off your camera...not bad though.

[lorellana]

Thanks, Clint and you are right I have to move my flash out of the camera, what about this one. I am trying the action hopefully they do't look too bad.

[AllenAyres]

Nice images - that statue is growing out of her head in the 3rd photo, you'd need to move right or left for better composition.

[Clint_Smith]

photoshop work looks ok...but need some work on composition. you are getting the rule of 3rds ok, but like Allen said, watch for things "growing" out of your subjects heads.

[lorellana]

Thank you guys, I will pay more attention to these details to get better myself. I am posting one more and again thanks.




Luis

[akimartymar]

That's a pretty good little drive from Houston to Port Arthur. What got you way down here?

[PhotosbyHollyWood]

First great concepts and ideas... pretty bride!!!

the first is a little dark,
the second one is NICE..like the action though..
the third I agree with the thing growing out of her head... and it could be just me but, I can't see some details in that dress!

the last one is nice... would like to see a little tighter crop...

please take my C & C for what it is worth (free) I have only done a couple of wedding in my time...

[AllenAyres]

I didn't notice that was the church in Port Arthur, my wife has her office very close to there.

For the last one, a tighter crop (maybe make it a square image by cropping from the bottom) and a little more sharpening on the bride with a little blur on the background may help focus the image and make her stand out more. For a shot like this, next time you might get lower and shoot up more to get the tree line out from behind her head. A shorter depth of field would help her stand out more too.

[lorellana]

Thank you all, this why I belong to this forum, we get a lot of advises that help us to improve and get better. I am posting another version of this photo, cropped differently please C&C to help me to improve. I am not so good with photoshop but I am learning.



Thank you
Luis

[AllenAyres]

I like that one much better. Lots of trees still in the background, but she's not lost in the concrete