Bridal in Deep Ellum

[imagesbyadam]

C&C welcome..

[monique_evette]

I like the colors of the locations and your poses (except for no. 2, she looks frighten), but her skin tone needs some work. She looks too yellowish and orange in some and then to red in others.

[stargal01]

#2 - she looks too stiff and uncomfortable. i like the pose in #3.

#1 - it's a good start, headed in the right direction. i think there's a way to take that pose and push it a little more. she could have rest her wrists on her head, more natural, and then maybe rest her head against her arm, towards the camera. not sure if that makes sense, but you can't see me doing it right now (haha, thank goodness no one can see me right now)

[12stones]

Are these posted in sRGB? They all look a little washed out to me. #2 she looks stiff, and I think that Monique's right about the skin tone, but the location, poses, and composition all look good to me.

[mom2aidan]

i agree that she looks yellow/orange in some of these but in others she looks like she spent too much time out in the sun.